Dirty,
But the best,
most well written dirty poem
I think I have ever read.
GJ.

Wow!!! nice one i rele lyk this one.. cant wait to read the rest of it. 5/5 of course. :D

Wow. Really great. I loved it. 5/5 Can't wait to read more.

I really liked this poem. To some people sex is only something they toy around with. But your poem simply explains that there is more than just fun in the art of "making love". Very well written. 5/5 Over this side.

-Darrin

And how old are you.......? jk. anywayz, nicely written. your a good writer. i added you to my favs. your awesome. keep writing Ash!

OMG! this is great got me blushing (jk) loved it

Great! ^^ as always, I can't wait to red the rest ^^