Comments : Poison on my tongue

  • 11 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    Oh, I simply cannot resist......

    reveal real
    mistake awake..
    soul control
    body embody..
    freely me
    melancholy be..
    basis hallucinosis
    entity identity...

    ....and jazz is born again....

  • 11 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Lisa, you did an excellent job, very nicely done, way to get creative, bravo!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Random_Cowboy

    Hmm. I like the form you did for this poem. I never even noticed that until you I finished reading it and you pointed it out.

    Great job!

    I don't really know what to say other than great job.