I love it..tis VRY VRY VRY original..

lissa

Aw thats cute. maybe add more to the story. but its fine the way it is too.

It's cute and original but you might want to go more in depth to show us how the "teddy" really feels and looks like.

Wow, this was good...I mean, I know the story was about a teddy bear, but there are so many other things a reader can think about when reading this poem that makes it extremely special. Keep it up xxx

I agree with them. it'd be so much more awesome if you had put more depth into it. but it's great!!! keep up the awesome work!! :)

love ya,
maggie