AmaZINg 4 sure its like uv taken simpicity and gieven it depth and meaning through ur emotions. I like the part "only seen through the eyes of the blind" it is generally a sensless statment but u made seem like a reality like it could happen. Its like u feel so over looked that that every one around u may aswell be blind in terms of u. well done!
I completely and totaly loved this poem. I love poems that are inspirational to others, its like a song that can make you want to get up and change your life. The feeling of this poem is the kinda of feeling that society needs to feel. I think you have great talent, and should keep writing because you never know one day when someone might read one of your poems and never be the same. :)