Oh...I absolutely adore this one! It's so strong and the wanting and the emotions just scream our through this poem. I love the line:
" see through the eyes of the blind."
Just absolutely stunnning :D

Very human and true feelings. Thanks for sharing. :)

I love this poem, It like describes my life keep writing

AmaZINg 4 sure its like uv taken simpicity and gieven it depth and meaning through ur emotions. I like the part "only seen through the eyes of the blind" it is generally a sensless statment but u made seem like a reality like it could happen. Its like u feel so over looked that that every one around u may aswell be blind in terms of u. well done!

Wow this is really good. I really like the concept of it.. very smart of you to think of that. great job! 5/5***

0oh huni this was sad deep and t0uching s0me heartfekt w0rds in this piece. very t0uchng =( thank u fr ur c0mment 0n my w0rk. meant al0t t0 me!! =]

l0ve fr0m
d0ra

Absolutely amazing, keep them coming

all the best and take care
5/5

Wonderfully written..*

I completely and totaly loved this poem. I love poems that are inspirational to others, its like a song that can make you want to get up and change your life. The feeling of this poem is the kinda of feeling that society needs to feel. I think you have great talent, and should keep writing because you never know one day when someone might read one of your poems and never be the same. :)

This was very touching... A short poem, yet with such meaning. Great job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I really liked this poem! your fricken talented :O