This is an awsome poem your really good!!!

Wow, i liked this one too, all of your poems, this is not very similar to something i have written but it is similar to something i have talked about, darkness and light. GREAT!!

I really like this poem because it catches your eyes and its just so there and people can understand ur confused n its amazing

I really like this poem!!! great job..

Nice work.
~HazE

Great poem! i really liked it!
~*Katherine*~

Awww...thats so sad and i am a very depressing person lol you can tell by th eway i act and my poems but this is great.
xoxroxyxox

Wow this was really good!

Great work again! loved everything about it. really painted a picture of sadness and everything. i just loved it! 5/5

Good job...i feel this way sometimes.

This poem is bangin is geat ur well good at writing poems!
stace
xXx

Thats pretty good i like

Awww. That was so good! I liked the emotion and heart you put to it. Nice work.

I'm falling deeper inside the darkness
see less
of my reflection.
((My favorite lines..))

I liked this a little bit better. Being a dark poem writer myself, I know what I Like, and in my opinion you could have put more emotion into this and tried a bit more. Forgive me for being so harsh. However, I did like the flow of it this time.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

This is a good poem..i think u were more venting than trying to make it sound very poetical. But it's still good:)
Keep writing:)

That was another greap poem... with a little work it could even be made into a song! well done keep goin!

Love
Jacs
xxxx

That was a whole lot better than the other poem...it was good nice flow and all...I enjoyed reading it...
It seemed like lyrics for a song in some way though
5/5

That was a whole lot better than the other poem...it was good nice flow and all...I enjoyed reading it...
It seemed like lyrics for a song in some way though
5/5

Wow, great work, i like the title of this it was kinda 'catchy'.

brilliant work.
5/5

~Murder

|Wow, powerful and hard hitting. Good job.