Comments : S.O.S

  • 11 years ago

    by Gina

    This is an awsome poem your really good!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    Wow, i liked this one too, all of your poems, this is not very similar to something i have written but it is similar to something i have talked about, darkness and light. GREAT!!

  • 11 years ago

    by aimee

    I really like this poem because it catches your eyes and its just so there and people can understand ur confused n its amazing

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashlee

    I really like this poem!!! great job..

  • 11 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    Nice work.
    ~HazE

  • 11 years ago

    by kittykat0232

    Great poem! i really liked it!
    ~*Katherine*~

  • 11 years ago

    by Roxy

    Awww...thats so sad and i am a very depressing person lol you can tell by th eway i act and my poems but this is great.
    xoxroxyxox

  • 11 years ago

    by UnToLd TrUtH

    Wow this was really good!

  • 11 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Great work again! loved everything about it. really painted a picture of sadness and everything. i just loved it! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Good job...i feel this way sometimes.

  • 11 years ago

    by stacey

    This poem is bangin is geat ur well good at writing poems!
    stace
    xXx

  • 11 years ago

    by kelly

    Thats pretty good i like

  • 11 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    Awww. That was so good! I liked the emotion and heart you put to it. Nice work.

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm falling deeper inside the darkness
    see less
    of my reflection.
    ((My favorite lines..))

    I liked this a little bit better. Being a dark poem writer myself, I know what I Like, and in my opinion you could have put more emotion into this and tried a bit more. Forgive me for being so harsh. However, I did like the flow of it this time.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    This is a good poem..i think u were more venting than trying to make it sound very poetical. But it's still good:)
    Keep writing:)

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacqui Armstrong

    That was another greap poem... with a little work it could even be made into a song! well done keep goin!

    Love
    Jacs
    xxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcus

    That was a whole lot better than the other poem...it was good nice flow and all...I enjoyed reading it...
    It seemed like lyrics for a song in some way though
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcus

    That was a whole lot better than the other poem...it was good nice flow and all...I enjoyed reading it...
    It seemed like lyrics for a song in some way though
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ForeverYoung

    Wow, great work, i like the title of this it was kinda 'catchy'.

    brilliant work.
    5/5

    ~Murder

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    |Wow, powerful and hard hitting. Good job.