Comments : Caress Me On The Dance Floor.(Acrostic)

  • Another Prettyful Poem, by Miss Lee-sah. I love you, dollface. It was great, perfect, flawless as always.
    Lovce,
    Heatherness

  • 11 years ago

    by Mark

    Aww this poem was AWESOME! .. just about as awesome as Pie! =O

    Nice work!! =D

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by darksoul

    Beautifully written and very fun to read

    keep it up :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha

    Very sensual. I enjoyed this poem. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Holy hell,
    I love this Lisa.
    The flow..amazing.

  • 11 years ago

    by Shade

    Wow...awesome poem..your a good writer... i cant wait to read some more... 5

  • 11 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    Very nice.....

  • 11 years ago

    by Fluffy

    I don't know how, but it's like words come to you as though you're reading a book! That was a great poem Lisa, I loved the way you picked up on every detail and managed to 'caress' them in such a way. Excellent poem, well done =).

    Much love and God bless,
    Fallen.

  • 11 years ago

    by jello

    This is really good. wow...i like it...lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by Psymon

    I love this, very sexy. You have a great way of expressing yourself and the feelings that arise in the throes of a new relationship...

    love and light

  • 11 years ago

    by LuvMeAlwayz

    AWESOME Poem!

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashley

    I really like this poem! I like the whole acrostic idea! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow, yet again, another excellent write! i loved this.. it was so romantic and passionate!

    Night shall come much to fast,
    ^ here, it is "too" not "to".. hehe

    another 5/5 from me!

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    OH! I like this. It's creative and diffrent actaully. And I love that about poems this one was amazing. I really enjoyed it.

    "Trace your finger down my lips,
    Hold me snug around my hips,
    Enchant me as my body slips."

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh that was cute.

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    That was brilliant! Flowed perfectly. Well done.

  • 11 years ago

    by just a little girl

    The way the words are rhymed and flow together are perfect !!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Whoa . This . Is . So . Good .
    I love the ending sooo much .
    The flow is good, and the choice of words is so good .
    I love this . Wowww .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew

    Superb, the flow was great and i can imagine it happening as i read it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Andrew

    Superb, the flow was great and i can imagine it happening as i read it.