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by Imperfectly Writing On The Walls
Another Prettyful Poem, by Miss Lee-sah. I love you, dollface. It was great, perfect, flawless as always.
Aww this poem was AWESOME! .. just about as awesome as Pie! =O
Nice work!! =D
Beautifully written and very fun to read
keep it up :)
Very sensual. I enjoyed this poem. 5/5
by Prophecies In Kodak
I love this Lisa.
Wow...awesome poem..your a good writer... i cant wait to read some more... 5
by Cyma Khan
I don't know how, but it's like words come to you as though you're reading a book! That was a great poem Lisa, I loved the way you picked up on every detail and managed to 'caress' them in such a way. Excellent poem, well done =).
Much love and God bless,
This is really good. wow...i like it...lol.
I love this, very sexy. You have a great way of expressing yourself and the feelings that arise in the throes of a new relationship...
love and light
I really like this poem! I like the whole acrostic idea! 5/5
Wow, yet again, another excellent write! i loved this.. it was so romantic and passionate!
Night shall come much to fast,
^ here, it is "too" not "to".. hehe
another 5/5 from me!
by Megann Lee
OH! I like this. It's creative and diffrent actaully. And I love that about poems this one was amazing. I really enjoyed it.
"Trace your finger down my lips,
Hold me snug around my hips,
Enchant me as my body slips."
by Jenni Marie
Awwwh that was cute.
That was brilliant! Flowed perfectly. Well done.
by just a little girl
The way the words are rhymed and flow together are perfect !!!!
Whoa . This . Is . So . Good .
I love the ending sooo much .
The flow is good, and the choice of words is so good .
I love this . Wowww .
Superb, the flow was great and i can imagine it happening as i read it.