It (like the one before) is written really!really! well! I love both of them* :)
Im sorry if I was harsh in the first comment, I didn't mean it that way, but you know it's really hard to communicate feeling's adaquitly over the computer :( I hope that the message came across the right way, I know I lecture alot, but I mean it to make you think & I mean it in the best & most constructive way*
you know that right :( ?
I love you dearly & hope to see you soon hehe ( stuffle hut & choclate milk!!!!*) lol, but anyway, I will ttyl*

Jesus bless you*

~nicole.

I love this poem. Liek you have no idea how much I love this poem! =D Hahha, its awsome and so are you. ^_^ My motherish word of the day.. :P lol. anyways, cya later.

Whew Whew Whew...This poem is amazing
Your Detail was EXCELLENT through-out the piece..and your words were great..
it was just flat out straight
AWESOME
keep it up
5/5
~TPOMH~

Wow that was an amazing poem