I love this, it's so sweet. I like the way it just flows as you read it. I really like your style of writing and the way the rhyme scheme fits in really well with the poem without throwing it off balance.
I liked this poem uite a bit it had good flow excellent style and a theme that works nicely. i like the story it tells and the feeling it conveys. a powerful work for sure and an excellent one at that 5/5