Comments : Starlight Night (Reprise)

  • 11 years ago

    by just a poet

    Wow, great poem, speechless i specialy love the rhyme scheme. great meaning simple yet comlex my fav type of poem

  • Love it, keep it up :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by bigwarmhugs

    Aw joe awesome job hun! I loved it :)

    look at the stars reflection on the water
    as I seek you with this soft melody of mine

    ESPECIALLY that line! really really sweet. keep it up hun *hugs* ruthie!

  • 11 years ago

    by Raychel

    I love it!! so romantic!!! its sweet.
    love ya lots
    ray

  • 11 years ago

    by Metal_Queen

    The poem is so sweet :) n well writen well for my point of view :) keep up the awesome work Luv Metal Queen

  • 11 years ago

    by Fluffy

    A beautiful account. I loved the way you used certain words in repetition form. You grasp the reader well with the flow of your poem and the tone is constant. Great work, well done.

    Much love and God bless,
    Fallen*-

  • 11 years ago

    by CrysluvsBowie

    Awww VERY sweet i love it...dang why couldn't guys have a romantic side like you? gosh...

  • 11 years ago

    by Christine

    I love this, it's so sweet. I like the way it just flows as you read it. I really like your style of writing and the way the rhyme scheme fits in really well with the poem without throwing it off balance.

  • 11 years ago

    by Violet

    It's a really nice poem, it has a good rhyme scheme, Keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Katie

    Hmm i love it!! thats the kind of thing i dream of, and u put it into words beautifully. wonderful imagery and closing lines

  • 11 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This is a very romantic and a unique poem, liked it all the way.

    all the best and take care

  • 11 years ago

    by Sole

    Wow. That was an amazing poem - the flow was absolutely flawless. One thing . . .

    are eyes meet

    Should that be our eyes meet?

    Anyway . . . other than that - awesome poetry, so deep. Very well written . .

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 11 years ago

    by Pepa

    Very lovely poem!! keep up the good work!!

  • Joe, that was beautiful emotion penned, good ryhme within lovely words, awesome!

    love
    gloria's glen

  • 11 years ago

    by Always4You

    You make me feel so right
    on such a beautiful night
    being here with you
    is such a delight

    I loved the rhyming..it flowed smoothly..great job!
    ~Always4You~

  • 11 years ago

    by Lemon Square Bear23

    Joe
    i love it lots it realy gets u going
    keep up the amazing work.
    kate
    ps am not one of ur freinds

  • 11 years ago

    by Latasha

    This poem is so cute... is it about a certian some1?;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaitlyn

    This is a really sweet romantic poem. i love it. its an excellent write. i really love this part:

    'look at the stars reflection on the water
    as I seek you with this soft melody of mine'

    Those two lines are amazing.
    Great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    I liked this poem uite a bit it had good flow excellent style and a theme that works nicely. i like the story it tells and the feeling it conveys. a powerful work for sure and an excellent one at that 5/5
    ~jacob

  • 11 years ago

    by RachiBubbles

    Awwwwwwww thats a great poem!!!!!!! i love it joe ur soo sweeet!!! :) keep up the good work