^^^ I hate leaving comments after him I never know what to say! He is such a sweetie I love him

Before your poem gets a comment from me let me just thank you for your kind words on my poem "where has the decency gone in the world?" It was so nice of you

Oh this poem Holly is so true for many teenagers not just in my high school but for teenagers all over..Drugs have gotten really bad these days..I agree with Endless Rapture you conveyed your message very well and actually my favortie part was the title..it was like "ohh I must read that!" I loved your last stanza as well!!!
Great Stuff Holly! Great Stuff!
Love always
Chelsey-Lynn

This is brilliant! great concept, and its so very true! great job, holly!

take care - hannah

This is fabulous. you have a wonderful way with words. nice job!

Holly, this is amazing with an awesome message!

"Unable to accept that
there's no real escape
drugs numb the pain
but life they can't reshape"
^^^ Love this stanza, excellent wording. And the ending was powerful, simply perfect!

Holly, what a beautiful penned you've done here, so true, yet strong message...i've agree with comment above, what else i can say. thanks for sharing, have a good day..

Love & peace
bert.

Truly outstanding Holly!
love and peace
shobhana

Good poem. great flow. it was easy to read and made sense. sometimes i try to read through some poems and you need a navigator to get you from beginning to end. you wonder where its going and when your finished reading it, it's like "huh"? i like plain speakin, so to speak.( no pun intended) anyway....great job. i like alot of your stuff.

Oh Holly, "Melissa and Her Magical Pen " is so sweet and unselfishly written! I can't begin to tell you what it means to me, seriously it made me tear up in a wonderful way.. What a pleasant surprise when I clicked on your name, thanks for the smile.. You really made my day!

Oh and sorry I couldn't comment on the correct poem. When I login on the love and friendship categories it signs me back out immediately.. Arggh

Holly this poem is amazing! i can definately relate to it, just knowing an addict. not the same drug but with drinking and my grandpa. he won't really ammit to having a problem so it always goes unfixed. it has horrible, stressful moments on the family when he's drinking though. such a great poem though, it's really strong and many can find ways to relate to it.

~Jacklyn

Holly this poem is amazing! i can definately relate to it, just knowing an addict. not the same drug but with drinking and my grandpa. he won't really ammit to having a problem so it always goes unfixed. it has horrible, stressful moments on the family when he's drinking though. such a great poem though, it's really strong and many can find ways to relate to it.

~Jacklyn

Most people that write as freely as you do dont get a good flow. I must say the flow was impeccable and the choice of words simple yet powerful. Very good poem about the subject and very catchy rhymes in some stanzas. I love when rhyming words complete eachother.

So true. wonderfulyl written. i am also in the works of trying to write a poem like this but it pails in comparison to this write! i think this poem expresses the reality of addiction and you have done this amazingly!

That is a really deep poem Holly. I thought it was amazing ...really well wrote. Timothy has told me about you so I decided to come check your work out im glad I did.

take care, Lis

This is fantastic! Each and every line is great! Great job!

Hey angel, wat the heck was dat about? Am tryin to0 be back, hope you are ok?
Love it, nut need a private about what K is about. Lol

Wow
i loved this
i know of this not 1st hand but sore drugs mess my mans life up and mine

but enugh of me
wow your words in this were beautiful i love it girl

From
lana

Very nice poem- thanks for sharing it with us
I have a new poem now "Phone Booth"- i would really appreciate it if you could read/rate it :)

A very real piece of work. I work with children with adictions. You hit the nail on the head. Awesome as always. 5/5

Been there
Done that
Survived
Does not mean you will
The odds are against us
Read this every day

Wow, great poem. keep up the good work.