This was actually really good. Better then I could ever do. I'm not good at love poems hehe. I can't beleive someone voted this a two, But don't worry, Im voting 5 =] I really liked it. Not sure why, There was just something about it. It was good reading! Keep up the great work =]

`natalie x-x

Wow! I love this and can really relate to the words, 'you want me, you need me, says the game that you play...' excellent!

love and light

Aww i love this.
I could relate.

5/5

This was excellent! I hate downvoters. This poem should be rated much higher. The emotion was put together so well in powerful words, and the ending really set the perfection off. Keep it up! 5/5

I love this...excellent job.5/5

That was beautiful, it came from the bottom of your heart and was perfect.
Tara-Kay

I like it. its interesting. and fastpaced. def enjoyed it. nice job