Comments : Came then Left

  • 11 years ago

    by Pure Silence

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    whoa... Juls, I love this .. I may have to steal the came and left part in a poem of my own...cause it works prefectly! this is simply a graceful and saddening poem, but its... unforgetable. Well done

    Juls hunny,
    You have helped me in many ways, and I'm glad I have 33.3% of that bond left. I love you, you're family... *Hugs*, you've already done millions of things for me... thankyou so much

    Love always
    Jenn, Hubby, and what ever else you call me lol

  • 11 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Beautiful poem...very interesting...I like it...the idea of using the days of the week like that was cool...I want to do something like that...but I don\'t want to steal your idea so I guess I wont...well once again nice poem...lataz

  • 11 years ago

    by Witchblade15

    Wow this poem was fantastic...very unique style of writing... but i must say i totally loved it...keep up the good work...im sure to continue readin ur poetry.

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Juls, wow. Was this kind of based on a non-fiction event?? If it wasn`t you sure made it sound convincing.
    5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Hmm, another poem about cutting. Original? I think not. Umm, if you want to write about a topic that is constantly discussed, at least try to be more creative? Try to look at it from a different point of view. That's my suggestion.

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Oh one more thing.. "Came Th(e)n Left"

    It's not "Than".. I just realized it.

  • 11 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    Aw that was so sad! I liked the way you wrote it though, it was very interesting to read, and even though it didn't rhyme it flowed really well, great work!

    --Steph

    P.s. In the title, it should be "then" instead of "than"