Very emotionally packed and ver deep.
The ending was superb and really brought the whole thing together.
My other favorite stanza is :
And that perfect hue of gray
that rolls off every syllable
with such honesty
paralyzes my intentions
and forces me to listen...
I really made a connection with you as the author of this poem as I can relate to the words you have written.
Well, some people try and try, and some are just born with it.. You are one of these gifted people who seem to make every word count, and leave me wanting more. You are amazing. I love this poem too. xx