Comments : Poem For My Unborn Child

  • 17 years ago

    by jessica

    Omg i need to know something do you really have a kid. you say that you don't but i'm not so sure you sure seem like you do. plz tell me if you do
    love ur babygirl

  • 17 years ago

    by Flower Child[hippie]

    This is so breath taking i love this!
    u are sooo good at writing

  • YOU TELL PPL YOU DONT HAVE A KID?! man shauns lucky to have you ay

  • 16 years ago

    by thandie

    Dammm love this poem..........great work and can you check out some of my poems and tell me what you think.thankz....and 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    Awwww this is sweet. you'd prolly be a great dad for just wanting to keep your child safe <3333333

  • 16 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really sad..but good. 5/5

    amandaxx.

  • 13 years ago

    by momopixie18

    Wow,so very sad.not sure what to say regarding the message, but the poem was well written :] deep