Comments : Keeper of dreams

  • 12 years ago

    by Cuddles

    I'm just a country girl
    searching for some truth
    in this fictional world...

    Perfect opening lines, Melissa! Incredible poem! Your work is amazing. This poem is me in ways that I won't allow myself to say. Awesome job once again

  • 12 years ago

    by Laura

    I almost cried...this really hit home for me. my dad has been gone since I was 16 as well.
    Very sad poem but very well written.
    I find it really hard to write about subjects like this as it always tun=rns out to be thoughts and feelings on paper and I can never format it well enough to present.

  • 12 years ago


    Very nice, Melissa! I love the ending, just beautifully written.
    Oh and the whole Ms Cleo hanging up on you cracked me up...great stuff.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 12 years ago

    by Katie

    Wow again! For once I'm lost for words .... it so doesn't happen very often lol .... I like to believe I'm a keeper of dreams too
    Katie xx

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! that is all i can say, just wow! that was excellent, it was just breathtaking! keep up the wonderful work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Nate

    Melissa, loved the poem. There is a lot of emotion and thoughts in it.

  • 11 years ago

    by PS

    You really have a talent. i was hooked from teh beginning which i esp loved