Comments : Break the Fall

  • 12 years ago

    by I Dont Care Bear

    I loved it, keep^ the good work

  • 12 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    I liked this poem. I see all the imagery in my head while I read this. It's really good.

    I've never seen a poem with a three line stanza structure.

    So this was a first to me.

    Also, it was interesting that they were in all in groups of three, and then all of a sudden there was the meat of the poem, all clumped together.

    I must admit I really didn't understand the ending.

    Great job.

  • 11 years ago

    by forgetmenot

    5/5 well done!!!