I loved it, keep^ the good work

I liked this poem. I see all the imagery in my head while I read this. It's really good.

I've never seen a poem with a three line stanza structure.

So this was a first to me.

Also, it was interesting that they were in all in groups of three, and then all of a sudden there was the meat of the poem, all clumped together.

I must admit I really didn't understand the ending.

Great job.

5/5 well done!!!
lizzie
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