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by I Dont Care Bear
I loved it, keep^ the good work
I liked this poem. I see all the imagery in my head while I read this. It's really good.
I've never seen a poem with a three line stanza structure.
So this was a first to me.
Also, it was interesting that they were in all in groups of three, and then all of a sudden there was the meat of the poem, all clumped together.
I must admit I really didn't understand the ending.
5/5 well done!!!