Comments : I love you

  • 11 years ago

    by Brigitte

    Thats so cute! One of your better one's hon! I'm so proud of you! Yesterday you had no idea on even rhyming and now look at you! AMAZING! Keep writting hon

    Much love
    Bee

  • 11 years ago

    by Kaylee

    This one was cute, and for once it made more sense and did not try and be funny but simply was funny. I just suggest capitilizing your i's.

  • 11 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This peice is really good, it flows nicely and the rhymes seem very natural. i am not too keen on the use of 1 and 2 rather than "one" and "two" but that is no big deal just a personal dislike lol.

    overal great peice

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by xox kate xox

    Awww that made me smile =)

    Keep up the good work.

    love kate xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Brigitte

    YAY Darling you made the top list on funny poems! GAH I'm so proud of you! lol Don't we remember "Brigitte what the heck rhymes with happy?" and every three seconds calling my house "Brigitte! i got a new line written!" LoL And now look at you!! My little baby poet!

    Love you hon
    Bee

  • 11 years ago

    by Gem

    That was fab!
    And it was so sweet!
    Well done!
    5/5!
    *Gem*

  • 11 years ago

    by stargirl49

    I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by ♥DiFFeReNT

    It's really cute. Good job!

  • Really cute i would sing it to my kids! hehe

    well done
    xxxxxxxxxx

  • 11 years ago

    by Ellie

    I agree with everyone else, it's adorable! >.

  • 11 years ago

    by Alexis

    Haha thats REALLY cute i know im alittle old to be liking these poems but i REALLY like that lol....comment my poems sometime...
    ---Alexis

  • 10 years ago

    by Khanyisile Cele

    That was really cute

  • 8 years ago

    by BraidhairCutie

    JUST CUTE!!!...THIS IS A CUTE POEM