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by HOLLY ARMER
I adore poems like this where life is given to an inadamate (sp?) object. It always makes for an awesome read.
You convey this perfectly, each emotion and thought...well done!
by shobhana kumar
Wow, Jeannie! the wonders you do with words! The way you've described life akin to driftwood is subtle, yet so overpowering that it hits you hard and real!
good luck and peace
by ~yOu EnVy Me ~
I love the ending 5/5 great
by Midnight Sun
You know as I read this poem I couldn't help but to think of how this relates to humans as well. It was very well penned. Keep it up! :)
by Serina the Squid
Beautiful, a strong message.