Comments : Driftwood

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    I adore poems like this where life is given to an inadamate (sp?) object. It always makes for an awesome read.
    You convey this perfectly, each emotion and thought...well done!
    Love ya~Holly

  • 11 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    Wow, Jeannie! the wonders you do with words! The way you've described life akin to driftwood is subtle, yet so overpowering that it hits you hard and real!

    great job!

    good luck and peace
    shobhana

  • 11 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    I love the ending 5/5 great

  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Comment #6:
    You know as I read this poem I couldn't help but to think of how this relates to humans as well. It was very well penned. Keep it up! :)
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 10 years ago

    by Serina the Squid

    Beautiful, a strong message.