Your poems were really good i enjoyed reading It made me have chills

Nicky

That is soo sadi actually have tears in my eyes uts a good poem but so upsetting xox

F*c k. I'm so sorry x
Great write though.
x-x

WOW;; DiD THAT REALLY HAPPEN? THAT`S SO SAD! GREAT POEM!

______HiS FRiEND*

I love stories/poems that are true because they show real emotion and tells something important.

You did a very good job writing this poem. im sorry that this happened to you. i hope things turn out better for you

Oh wow this poem is very deep.

It is very sad

I like it

the only thing you need to change are the parts where it says dint

Wow. thats some strong stuff...if this rly did happen im so sry..
but great poem.
katrina

This is so intense and powerful. Full of emotions and very well written. Again, like your other poem, i can relate. I hate to say it but i know what you're going through...

But its an excellently written poem, and youve done a great job at expressing yourself. Keep it up. 5/5