Beautifully written. It make me thought in my mind of how u wrote this. Very touching and it like I am watching movie by reading yours truthful poem. Wow, u made it beautiful! Keep it up!
10 years ago
"She worked her fingers to the bone everyday
Slaving under the steaming structure of steel
She never treated herself to the good things in life
All that ever mattered was bringing home a meal"
I love this part because it reminds me of my mother how she works hard and has so many things to take care of that at the end theres nothing left for her great poem!!...=)