Comments : Just A Boy

  • 10 years ago

    by danielle

    Good job great expressions excellent work
    ~danielle~

  • 10 years ago

    by kasia nicole

    That was a really good poem about a boy good wording by the way

  • 10 years ago

    by Julie

    Nicely done! Very touching.... beautiful poem! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Lisa

    Amazing write
    truyl beautiful and impeccably written
    keep it up!
    -Lisa

  • 9 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Beautifully written. It make me thought in my mind of how u wrote this. Very touching and it like I am watching movie by reading yours truthful poem. Wow, u made it beautiful! Keep it up!

  • 9 years ago

    by AnotherAries

    "She worked her fingers to the bone everyday
    Slaving under the steaming structure of steel
    She never treated herself to the good things in life
    All that ever mattered was bringing home a meal"
    I love this part because it reminds me of my mother how she works hard and has so many things to take care of that at the end theres nothing left for her great poem!!...=)

  • 9 years ago

    by Brittany Michelle

    Wow I love this ... great work

  • 8 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    Reminds me of the little things so many people take for granted, and its brang out in a poem.
    Goodjob. xo

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    WOW! This is beautiful and truly inspirational. I love the sincerity of this piece. Very, very beautiful!