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by Joy Jun 19, 2006
Love, romance /
Not being with you,
Really hurts me inside,
But I can't help these feelings,
And they just won't subside.
All I want is to be with you,
To get to know your life,
I want to know your hopes and dreams,
And even all your strife.
You were always there for me,
Even when I didn't realize it,
I wish I would've of seen it sooner,
Maybe it'd of changed things a bit.
It really upsets me though,
That I can't even just like you,
It has to come with all these problems,
And they're very hard to get through.
That one you once had,
Doesn't like this at all,
She's holding me back,
And having me not call.
She's the one who gave you up,
And it upsets me so much,
That she's still hanging on,
As if it wasn't such.
Sadly I don't think it even matters,
You would take her back too,
I feel like I don't have a chance,
Even after all that I do.**UGG FRUSTRATED TO NO END**
*edited* (thanks sean)
Well i can also, relate to this one lol...i'm sooo frusturated with boy's right now, it's driving me insane..but i loved this poem, you showed great emotions in it! it was great
by Steve V
Very well composed and straight to the point. Thank You so very much for sharing =o)
by Robie Lincer
Thats a very good written poem 5/5
Hey i know that feeling. hang in there. great poem though. keep writing.
lots of love
This is VERY good I look forward to seeing more of your work!