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by Jessica Jun 24, 2006
Love, romance /
Laying peacefully in a bed of flowers
I cannot tear my eyes away
From the angel that rests close to me
Holding my delicate gaze all day..
The sweet aroma of honey
Floats through the air
I stare into her sea blue eyes
And run my fingers through her golden hair..
The warm rays of the sun
Flow slowly over me
My body starting to feel tingly
And the will to feel overtaking the will to see..
Gently I put a finger to her moist lips
She slowly lifts her glossy eyes
And as her ruby lips caress mine
The knot of love between us ties..
This supple feeling, this exotic taste, this magical moment
Is one I will never forget and will eternally miss
Lying curled up in the blossoms with an angel
We shared a cinnamon kiss..
[Written in a guys perspective.. lol]
by Robert Gardiner
Extraordinary work, bravo on such a superlative and simply fantastic write, incredibly well done, great job Jessy!!!
Great poem! I love the flow it has and the rhyming is perfect. You are a really great writer! 5/5
Aw, this is so cute and powerful.. And very different since it was written from a guys point of view. Very nice twist, and I loved the ending. Great job.
This poem was awesome, it really was great! There is no critisism needed here!
by Ike Dizzle
With someone that is younger than me, you write real good. 5/5