by Jessica          Jun 24, 2006
    
        category :
            Love, romance /
            sensual love
            
    
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            Laying peacefully in a bed of flowers  | 
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 Extraordinary work, bravo on such a superlative and simply fantastic write, incredibly well done, great job Jessy!!!  | 
by Polly
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            Great poem! I love the flow it has and the rhyming is perfect. You are a really great writer! 5/5  | 
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            Aw, this is so cute and powerful.. And very different since it was written from a guys point of view. Very nice twist, and I loved the ending. Great job.  | 
by AnnMarie
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            This poem was awesome, it really was great! There is no critisism needed here!  | 
by Ike Dizzle
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            With someone that is younger than me, you write real good. 5/5  |