Wow...this relates to me really well..it makes me wnt to cry.... i luved the poem it was awsome....good detail at first i thought...why was it even sad then i read the other half....wow this one hit me to the core.... a 5/5 for me....

I'm not sure how much I liked this...But it was a very strong write and I loved the story. But you broke the rhyming flow half way through which killed it....

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Wow,
this one was really emotional to.
or maybe i'm just an emotional person.
haha,idk.
but it was an awesome poem.
keep up the great work.=]
--lexie♥

I liked it. it was great!

WOOOW i luv this so much ... i LUV all your poems ur such a great writter .. thanx for commenting on mine!!

leah xxx

Fricken Awesome Poem. I Loved It.

Hmmm. This was long, yet you manged to keep it intresting and to keep the flow flowing great, that was so sad, and amazing. I really enjoyed it Hun.

Wow. I...I don't know what to say. It was terrific. I loved it. I like poems that kind of have a story to them. It makes them a bit more interesting. GREAT job! Lol. Keep it up. Just one mistake:

one night she went to [pary]
^^^Pray 5/5 =) xoxo

Samantha

This is a very good poem i loved it too! even though the ones who loves you dnt show u love! they really do and dnt knw how to show it!

this poems explains it all ! it was really good! the flow was good and all!

That was a nice way of putting suicide isn't an answer. You or your loved ones wont get anything out of it. Nice work!

Thats such a sad story .... yet written beautifully ...

awesome

I'm nearly crying...never stop writing. 5/5

Well I'm glad you really love it, because I really love it too=D That was honestly one of the best suicide poems I've ever read.

That peom was beautiful, and i love it. i am only 12 and i am thinking about suicide. but this poem relly touched me. thank you for writing it! ~OnTheRunFromLove~

Aww... this was absolutely beautifully written. i liked the last part, and it should make people think before they act.

5/5
Allanah

Wow, thats was really good, im am one who wants to leave, and this poem really told me something, great job

Wow this was very very good!

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

I like this one but to me . no one loves me cause im stupider then ****