Comments : Vampiric Legacy

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Holy.....This is awesome! I've never read anything like this from you, Mom! Absolutely brilliant! You know I love dark poetry, why have you been hiding this from me? I never knew you had it in you to write something like this, not that I ever doubted your talent, this just so isn't your style.
    I flippin' love these lines:

    "And as I walk with steps of doubt
    I hear his voice in slumbered gloom"

    "
    As heathen creatures here are born
    In Satan's sanction comes the kiss
    Of pungent breaches and bloody thorns."

    and finally this line:

    "Among the undead's catacombs."

    Love ya~Holly

  • 11 years ago

    by Cynthia

    This is a wicked poem. It reminds me of a song "Vampires Will Never Hurt You by My Chemical Romance". Very kool. "Amond the undead's catacombs" is a kewl line ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Wow!!! I felt like I was in the room waiting with him, fantastic write in every way, the flow was perfect, and visually my senses are reeling. Thanx for writing it. Tim

  • 11 years ago

    by ~yOu EnVy Me ~

    This poem is scary and lovely well written 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Awesome! I really like it, good work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Once again speechless... your an exeltent poet

  • 11 years ago

    by broken reflection

    Fantabulous.... I love poetry and vampires, so when you combine the two so nicely, it makes me appreciate talent.... 5/5 keep it up!