Woah. that was really amazing. that was one of the bets i've ever read. if this is tru im sry! i loved how much detail and emotion was put into this. really keeps you interested! 5/5

Wow.
that was really good and I can really relate to that.
5/5

Hey this is really an amazing piece, great selection of words, beautifully written

all the best and take care
5/5

Its sad but gud.if u eva need to talk im here! 5/5 keep writin!

I apologise in advance for the sheer unoriginality of this comment and it shortness but nonetheless I can think of little else to say so here it is:

WOW!

yours Sincerely

Andrew