Comments : One Nation Under God

  • 11 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Enjoyed reading this one. Flow was flawless. Message was great.

  • 11 years ago

    by not a poet

    American pride.! great work!

  • 11 years ago

    by Krissey

    Michael, I can't tell you how much I loved this poem...I don't even know where to start!...First off, your rhymes were incredible in this piece, everything was just picture perfect and everything just fit so well. I am a very patriotic person and I try to write poems like these and they turn out alright, but WOW nothing can compare to this one. I think you've spoken for every patriotic person in America. This was amazing, kudos for you!

  • 11 years ago

    by fayyad

    Good keep up\ the exelent work

  • 11 years ago

    by Kyra

    Hey great poem i liked it.
    ~Kyra~

  • 11 years ago

    by loretta Taylor

    Very nice Michael. It is an elegant piece of work. 5/5/ Loretta

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Another great write! You are an amazing poet! My favorite line of this was: "Divided we fall, but you know united we stand" I loved that! Great job on this! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Courtney

    Hi you don't knoww me but I just joined yesturday, Your poem was the first one that I read, and by the way it is really really good. Do you ever think of publishing? Cause maybe you should.

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I really liked this... Your first two stanzas, though, were much stronger than your last..

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 10 years ago

    by tryinXtoXholdXmyXheadXup

    Well written and great flow to it amazing keep it up

  • 10 years ago

    by Independence Forever

    Stupendous poem, they say i'm good but i don't hold a candle to you

    your servant:
    david

  • 10 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.