Enjoyed reading this one. Flow was flawless. Message was great.

American pride.! great work!

Michael, I can't tell you how much I loved this poem...I don't even know where to start!...First off, your rhymes were incredible in this piece, everything was just picture perfect and everything just fit so well. I am a very patriotic person and I try to write poems like these and they turn out alright, but WOW nothing can compare to this one. I think you've spoken for every patriotic person in America. This was amazing, kudos for you!

Good keep up\ the exelent work

Hey great poem i liked it.
~Kyra~

Very nice Michael. It is an elegant piece of work. 5/5/ Loretta

Another great write! You are an amazing poet! My favorite line of this was: "Divided we fall, but you know united we stand" I loved that! Great job on this! 5/5

Hi you don't knoww me but I just joined yesturday, Your poem was the first one that I read, and by the way it is really really good. Do you ever think of publishing? Cause maybe you should.

I really liked this... Your first two stanzas, though, were much stronger than your last..

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Well written and great flow to it amazing keep it up

Stupendous poem, they say i'm good but i don't hold a candle to you

your servant:
david

Very good poem, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.