Not bad, it took a few lines to get going but the ending was certainly good. I think on the second line it would sound better "no matter if it's sun or rain."
I liked the reference to present and future. Thanks for sharing.
this is laugh mixed with tears.
a wonderful poem by the greatest poet.
but just to let you know, If you take over her sleep then she would not mind following you to out of city. right?
i mean i would,lol.
the greatest hopeful poem.
I honestly do not get why so many people claim this poem to be anything out of the ordinary. I saw nothing outstanding, nice, good, lovely, wonderful, well, or amazing in this poem- things that all these people have said to be present within these lines.