Comments : But That Time

  • 12 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Please read and comment on this poem as it mean a lot to me.....

  • 12 years ago

    by MadelineJayde

    This p0em is s0 beautifull written and i w0uld have to agree with y0u, its 0ne 0f y0ur better 0nes! great j0b 0nce again!
    l0ve maddy x0ox

  • 12 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Not bad, it took a few lines to get going but the ending was certainly good. I think on the second line it would sound better "no matter if it's sun or rain."
    I liked the reference to present and future. Thanks for sharing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    This was an amazing poem! I read it twice because it really...captivated me. The message it so true and this is definately one of your better poems-- Great write and keep up the good work! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by shela

    you are giving out hope in this one, I am sure everyone love this poem, It is too great to write some words about it here, I have to email you my feelings about it.
    take care.

  • 12 years ago

    by freshta

    this is laugh mixed with tears.
    a wonderful poem by the greatest poet.
    but just to let you know, If you take over her sleep then she would not mind following you to out of city. right?
    i mean i would,lol.
    the greatest hopeful poem.

  • 12 years ago

    by Laura

    Wow this was really well written!

    My favorite part was:
    In every moment,
    There is something new to see.
    While you don't respect my feelings
    The same feelings may not be.

    I like how you structured the lines.
    I could really relate to the feeling of this poem. it is happy and sad all mixed into one write. I like how you take us from past to future.

    My only change would be this line:
    No matter it is sun or rain.

    It may read easier if you changed it to something like
    No matter if it is sun or rain
    No matter if it is shine or rain

    Just a suggestion but all in all I loved it and it was a very enjoyable and uplifting read!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Pretty nice poem.

    We have hope for a happy tomorrow
    Even if today we live through pain.
    [I really liked those lines. They were great!]

    It was a pretty good poem. Liked it alot. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 12 years ago

    by XXTruthSeekerXX

    Nice relaxed poem. great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Great job , I really liked the theme and the rhyming / rhythm worked out well too.
    Thanks for your comment on my song!

    **Samantha Hollywood

  • 12 years ago

    by Shawna

    Great Poem!! I will try to check out some more of yours!!

  • 12 years ago

    by ABrookeD

    I love the flow of this poem. I just kept wanting to read on and on. I love the diction. It was really good. 5/5 keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Good one! Very well written. I thought it was as usual blossomed full of emotion. Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Leah20

    Very nice job. I love the wording, very nice flow!!! Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Colby

    Hey goran great poem, loved it! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by None

    I honestly do not get why so many people claim this poem to be anything out of the ordinary. I saw nothing outstanding, nice, good, lovely, wonderful, well, or amazing in this poem- things that all these people have said to be present within these lines.

  • 12 years ago

    by SMILEoften

    I love this poem.
    It's great.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nelle

    WOW!! i can see why it's your favorite, i think it's my favorite one that i have read so far today!! it was amazing veryyyyyyy inspiring!!! i loved it...5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Tamra

    Thanks for the comments. Wow. I loved this, flawlessly written. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ur green eyez babygirl

    Omg......... this is great so much emotion in it.... thinking about a heartbreaker makes you think twice