Comments : Charlie

  • 11 years ago

    by Biscuit

    Awww, this poem is so cute, both funny and heart-warming, a wonderful achievment!

  • 11 years ago

    by Natalie

    Aww! Wow. This was so beautifl, and funny at the same time. Tehe. I loved it!

    The only thing I found wrong was this line: "I'll keep you safe fro harm" ..I think you were meant to say 'from harm'.

    Other than that, this was a fantastic piece. Keep it up! 5/5

    Natalie``

  • 11 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Aww. Yet again...ANOTHER great poem. Very cute. I love it.

    It meant SO much that you r/r/c on ALL of my poems. :)

    >black&&blue

  • 11 years ago

    by Nelle

    Awwww that was soo cute and sweet and adorable, and i just loved it! you have a great imagination, the imagery was perfect!! I can honestly say i have never read a poem like this before! it was great! good job

  • 11 years ago

    by Sarah White

    I don't usually like poems from this section, but the child-like innocence that you write with, makes this really endearing. Loved this poem.

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    WOW i loved this poem!!! and donno what to say but WOW 5/5 no douth about that :D

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Ahh! I love this poem! Lol. It's so fun! Great writing and rhyiming. The lines flowed very well. I used to have a caterpillar xD. It went into a butterfly. But it broke it's wing lol. Anyways...terrific poem! Looking forward to reading more! xoxo

    Samantha

  • 11 years ago

    by Heather

    That was a very cute poem.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    Aw such a wonderful job. It kind of reminded me of when I was younger and I used to catch a whole bunch of bugs and keep them, and I loved each and every single one of them no matter what they were. Change is a beautiful thing and this poem shows that in a different light. Amazing I loved it

  • 11 years ago

    by Deana

    This poem was so light hearted , it was
    cute and refreshing great job !

  • 11 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Hey this would make a great children's book. Great job. 5/5
    -kakashi

  • 11 years ago

    by *Daniel94*

    Great work, you really know how to write and rhyme, thax for brightening up my day.

  • 11 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Goddess --
    Hey! Decided to check out this poem. It was really cute ;; sounds kind of like it should be oriented for a child`s book. I think that would be a good idea, this is really cute! Great job, the rhyming and flow was terrific. 5/5

    Samantha Hollywood

  • 11 years ago

    by Kirsty palmer

    Awww wow.. it was beautiful.. and sweet...yet funny aswell, nice job...keep writting... loved this peom.. i hope that you will read and comment on mine too, willbe nice to see what you think.. Kirsty Palmer xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Jaime

    That was the most adorable poem I've read in a long time. It came across so child-like, so naive. It was written well too. Amazing job.

  • 11 years ago

    by Carmen

    Tehee. now i'm in a good mood and i feel like a little kid again. thanks for that! keep up the good work

  • 11 years ago

    by Destiny

    That's frickin cool!
    Lol it's a good poem for kids.

  • 11 years ago

    by Nada

    Whats wrong wit you? this is not called funny, its called sweet or sad...but on dah real, its really good, keep it up, i liked the rhythm =P

  • 11 years ago

    by i¿!JustXForget!¿i

    I loved this poem.entertaining..reminded me of story i heard back in 2nd grade..good job.put a smile on my face :)

  • 11 years ago

    by crazyandsweet

    That is a great poem....I really enjoyed it, I am a teacher and that is awesome :)