Ants

by sibyllene   Jul 25, 2006


Are stepping little lines
around the wrinkled cotton
and tracing tiny spirals on
apricots that are half eaten
as the sunny juices drip onto the
awkward yet artistic
ambling of the mini moving specks.

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  • 17 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    I really liked this. I've never been a fan of ants but I think I am converted lol.
    It is really cute and funny and the style is great.

  • 17 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Great pleiade! I love your attention to detail, makes for an awesome read.
    Take care and keep it up~Holly

  • 17 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Haha, thanks! it was fun to write - i'd never tried that style before

  • 17 years ago

    by livingwith

    I love the style, i never knew ants could sound so beautiful, with out the tytle, i couldnt help but see art, just surreal. And im not understating eather, its really that good.

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