Comments : Leaving You

  • 12 years ago

    by goddess-glamourpuss

    This is really sweet and clearly heartfelt. It is always difficult when friends move on but it all adds to the tapestry of life.
    I think you expressed your feelings clearly without getting over seentimental.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nelle

    I loved this one, also It was sweet but still sad..I can relate to this one alot too it reminds me of one of my old best friends..she lived with me and then she had to move to a diferent state..and yeah this was very heartfelt and emotional..the flow and rhythm was great! i loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    Sammy --
    I had to give this poem a 4/5 for a couple of reasons. First of all , the rhyming worked out well for the most part. Somewhere along the way, you rhymed "up" with "up", which really isn`t rhyming, I guess. The flow wasn`t so great -- some of your lines were too short. I would add some words that still give it the same effect, but make it longer so it flows better. But otherwise, great job. You must be a great friend. =D

    Love Much,
    Samantha Hollywood

  • 12 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Very cliche... But the rhythum was very nice as well.. You used simple rhymes though; try not to do that, it takes away from your poem.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 12 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Sad, but, as most poem written for another person are, it has many ways to infer the meaning behind it. Nice piece overall.

    As always~ Kate

  • 12 years ago

    by ali

    I think you have grasp the friend leaving feeling really good. this has happened to me and i am going through it and i can really relate to whats going on with your life. also whats great about this poem is that i felt deep emotion and it was amazing. good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by ToTormentedToEvenCare

    I know how you feel i had to leave school too
    and i know how hard it is to say good by
    i love it

  • 11 years ago

    by rhiannon

    I have to thank u for writting this i just lost a friend that moved and couldnt find the words to write a poem

  • 11 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    It written so well a and it comes to ur heart it sad... will this is great poems keep it up 4/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    I had shivers off this one it was so good it reminds me of my best friend who i lost to my bf big mistake gladly though she forgave me an we are still close you will remain in her heart forever xxx alex xxx

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    For i thought it was good.

    i dont care if the sentences are short, i dont care if 'some' of the rhyming is not perfect but does anyone know of anyone that is perfect.

    this is a great poem. with lots of feeling and emotion. what a great poem needs.

    i gave you a 5/5 cause it hit something deep inside my heart. like when reading it i was experiencing it as well.

    thats an added plus. not many writters can portray stories into their poems, but you can and that is a trait you should try to use more often.


  • 11 years ago

    by bridgette

    I love your poem it makes me think of me & my sis....

  • 11 years ago

    by sweety89

    I'm graduating this year and have a friend i fell that way about.I really like your poem.