This is really sweet and clearly heartfelt. It is always difficult when friends move on but it all adds to the tapestry of life.
I think you expressed your feelings clearly without getting over seentimental.
I loved this one, also It was sweet but still sad..I can relate to this one alot too it reminds me of one of my old best friends..she lived with me and then she had to move to a diferent state..and yeah this was very heartfelt and emotional..the flow and rhythm was great! i loved it 5/5
I had to give this poem a 4/5 for a couple of reasons. First of all , the rhyming worked out well for the most part. Somewhere along the way, you rhymed "up" with "up", which really isn`t rhyming, I guess. The flow wasn`t so great -- some of your lines were too short. I would add some words that still give it the same effect, but make it longer so it flows better. But otherwise, great job. You must be a great friend. =D
I think you have grasp the friend leaving feeling really good. this has happened to me and i am going through it and i can really relate to whats going on with your life. also whats great about this poem is that i felt deep emotion and it was amazing. good job!
I had shivers off this one it was so good it reminds me of my best friend who i lost to my bf big mistake gladly though she forgave me an we are still close you will remain in her heart forever xxx alex xxx