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by Sarah White Aug 2, 2006
Love, romance /
Lame beauty withering slowly
Against the precious life form's arm.
A kiss planted so gently
Upon a lover's palm.
Sweet teardrops of the sunlight
Bathe them in a reclusive glow
A shadow falls intently
Upon a lover's plateau.
Alas! It seems pure nature
Has followed in appeal,
So calm, the world is living
Upon a lover's ideal.
This was a great poem and i am sorry i took so long. This poem is so beautiful!!!! i am glad you entered my contest with it!!!!
by The Lonely Rose
This is a beautiful poem..i liked it..
by Lady Vengeance
Really sweet. i loved all the analogies adn especially the line "sweet teardrops of the sunlight". man, that was soooo beautiful. i adored this poem. 100% brilliant : )
Beautiful job, I loved the second stanza.
"Alas" usually refers to something sad.
by N J Thornton
Why has this such a low rating? Very well written. Good use of rhyme, nicely portrayed, and the repetition use worked well too. I really don't have a bad comment to say about this. Thanks for sharing.