Short, yes, but great flow. Keep it up

Although short it was still sweet lol.
Some of the rhymes seem a bit cliched but it was still cute.
Nice job.

Awh. I like it. Like when I was first reading it. I was thinking "Why is this in sad poems..?" Then I read abit more. And I saw how it ended. It was really well written. I enjoyed it. :]

Loved the ending to the poem. I thought it was well thought out and sweet. Good one! x0x

Heyy Sam, It's me Crystal I really like this, its really good and it doesn't matter how short it is, and its just that it just flowed to ur paper bc if it didn't it wouldn't be this good but i'm talking to you on msn so ill chat to yah there peace luv yah

Heyy Sam, It's me Crystal I really like this, its really good and it doesn't matter how short it is, and its just that it just flowed to ur paper bc if it didn't it wouldn't be this good but i'm talking to you on msn so ill chat to yah there peace luv yah

Heyy Sam, It's me Crystal I really like this, its really good and it doesn't matter how short it is, and its just that it just flowed to ur paper bc if it didn't it wouldn't be this good but i'm talking to you on msn so ill chat to yah there peace luv yah

Heyy Sam, It's me Crystal I really like this, its really good and it doesn't matter how short it is, and its just that it just flowed to ur paper bc if it didn't it wouldn't be this good but i'm talking to you on msn so ill chat to yah there peace luv yah

Heyy Sam, It's me Crystal I really like this, its really good and it doesn't matter how short it is, and its just that it just flowed to ur paper bc if it didn't it wouldn't be this good but i'm talking to you on msn so ill chat to yah there peace luv yah

Heyy Sam, It's me Crystal I really like this, its really good and it doesn't matter how short it is, and its just that it just flowed to ur paper bc if it didn't it wouldn't be this good but i'm talking to you on msn so ill chat to yah there peace luv yah

Heyy Sam, It's me Crystal I really like this, its really good and it doesn't matter how short it is, and its just that it just flowed to ur paper bc if it didn't it wouldn't be this good but i'm talking to you on msn so ill chat to yah there peace luv yah

Short poems are usually better, and yours was good. The one suggestion I'd make is change the words a bit because you start of by saying he's and then change it to you.

I loved this poem it was really cool :):) my fav bit was ' Alas, I know we will not come to be ' it was so well thought up and good flowing words for the right moment in the poem keep it up :):):) xxx alex xxx (:(:(:

I liked it, but I think it should be under 'Love' poems instead. This had a bit more emotion to it and it seemed to mean something to you. Good job.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

Really great this is enough not too short as long as a poem ends itself with a right flow and good rhyme
rhyme the sangs itself
we can call that as a great master piece

great job keep it up

Geneross

Pretty good job. Here's some thoughts: Your rhymes seem a bit basic. Also, "out of the blue" is a very common line that I've seen several times.

Good job, I enjoyed reading it, it flowed really well. 5/5

Much better this is a great piece
It flows well and makes sense
5/5
~Emah

This was a good poem. Funny how you sayd a 'good dream' usually 'bad dreams' are called 'nightmares'. I guess you didn't put that in purposely.. more an accident but it was a good one. lol anyways good poem :P

Alas, I know we will not come to be,
This is a very good love poem and a lot of people can relate to it. Soemtimes a love can seem some wonderfull and out of the blue than just as fast as it appeared it dissapears =(