Heyy..jessy... i can really easily understand your poem...i hate this kinda situation.. and i can feel how sad and mad about it..you expressed that feeling very well enough..plus.. i like the last stanza the best!! 5/5 GREAT!!

Sad poem and well written i enjoyed reading it...keep up the good writtng...

Good job i liked reading this nice sad poem doesnt make sense but great job 5/5

Awwwww that was SO sad...and the situation in the poem sounded so bad...but it's beautiful and i LOVE it!!!! i could REALLY relate to it and the flow of everything was great!!! keep up the great work...:):):):)

*~*xxBaBi_GrrLxx*~*

Awww babe that was great. sad but sweet at the same time. I can as I'm sure many other girls can relate to this also. but the way you wrote it was beautfiul. your words flowed perfectly and your emotions over took the whole poem. i loved it!!! Great job sweetie

Great Poem My Girl, Looking Forward To reading More

.:^Hazel_Kitten^:.

This is one of the best poems i think ive read on this type of subject... its so emotional and effective..

basically its amazing!!!

6/5

sarah

4/5 it was good but i think it needs a little ryming but i relly liked it

Another great poem by a great poet, keep up the great work like always.
i really liked this one.

Aww this is sad :-( But very well written. Keep it up!

Yes, it was such a sad poem but very beautifully written, Jessy, as always. I really love your work, no matter the topic or the length of it; you always get a great poem! Keep it up! 5/5
Best wishes,

TILLmyLASTtearFALLS

Awh! Wow! This was really sad. Awh! I just wanna give you a big hug right now. :P But then you'd probably catch my sickness and then you'd be sick, too. lmao. Anywho, back to the poem. It was wonderful. Very nice flow, I liked it alot. Keep it up! Ily. 5/5

Natalie``

Ah!! Great poem!! This is so sad!!! I know exactly how it feels!! anyways it was another great write and it flowed and rhymed nicely!! you did a wonderful job!! 5/5!

This is another good poem! you really got the talent in writing, it was sad, and very sad! the flow was good!