Black Heart

by Lisa   Sep 4, 2006


Tears streaming down my face
Heart feels so out of place
Laying on the ground
Beating slow.. slower.
In a puddle of its own blood.
Slowly dieing.

Where are you?
You should be here to help me, to save me.
You're the reason I feel this way
My body sore,
My heart slowly comes to a stop.

My eyes go black.
The tears falling like a continuous waterfall
Never ending

Pictures of you I can't rip up
Your smile turns my heart black..
Your lips meeting mine; it goes dry
Grey matter
The ring sitting on my dresser falls onto my heart
And shatters it, grey ashes everywhere
One small shimmer of light in it all
The ring.

You had my heart, my soul
My love
I know why you let me go
But it doesn't make the pain lessen

These tears will fall for you
This heart will always be yours
I will never love again
I'm done, cold, black and empty inside.

And you will never know..
You will never know
You can never look back,
Never.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    Excellent poem, great flow and wording was perfect very sad and heartfelt a lot pain felt in that write, you did a wonderful job expressing your talent ,best wishes to you and your writing ,please keep it up, you are gifted, your friend Tracy dean~ 5/5~

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent poem dear!...it's soo touching n filled with emotions...sad though but well penned...i can really relate to it too...great write!
    5/5!=)
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Darien

    "Slowly dieing"
    ['dying']

    This is one of those sad love poems, where the emotions are expressed really well. I could feel the sadness of love. The last verse though, I thought was a little weak. The first two lines were effective, but the last two weren't. It was an overall, good poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Hey thanks for commenting on my poem "hear my call" and i just wanted to let you know that im not going through that with my mom .lol.

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    That's a great poem. Very well written, dont worry theres alot of other people. 5/5

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