Tears streaming down my face
Heart feels so out of place
Laying on the ground
Beating slow.. slower.
In a puddle of its own blood.
Where are you?
You should be here to help me, to save me.
You're the reason I feel this way
My body sore,
My heart slowly comes to a stop.
My eyes go black.
The tears falling like a continuous waterfall
Pictures of you I can't rip up
Your smile turns my heart black..
Your lips meeting mine; it goes dry
The ring sitting on my dresser falls onto my heart
And shatters it, grey ashes everywhere
One small shimmer of light in it all
You had my heart, my soul
I know why you let me go
But it doesn't make the pain lessen
These tears will fall for you
This heart will always be yours
I will never love again
I'm done, cold, black and empty inside.
And you will never know..
You will never know
You can never look back,
Excellent poem, great flow and wording was perfect very sad and heartfelt a lot pain felt in that write, you did a wonderful job expressing your talent ,best wishes to you and your writing ,please keep it up, you are gifted, your friend Tracy dean~ 5/5~
This is one of those sad love poems, where the emotions are expressed really well. I could feel the sadness of love. The last verse though, I thought was a little weak. The first two lines were effective, but the last two weren't. It was an overall, good poem.