Comments : Chaotic

  • 11 years ago

    by Knee

    Hey Gal, I've been waiting for a newly written poem of you..for so long, hehe!

    this is very great, the ending of the poem was very touchyyyy...
    I dunno wut to say but this poem is creative and, to tell the truth, I found difficulty in reading some lines..since my english doesn't rock,hehe!
    very great poem thou ;)
    Keep it up, My sweet inspiration =D

    Best Of Luck
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 11 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    Oh wow...excellent job...i loved it...i'm not sure i understood the meaning to it though? maybe you could explain it? i loved the rhythm and flow of the poem though.

  • 11 years ago

    by LockedInEternity

    Beautiful poem...the words flowed like magic:)
    I really liked these sentences for some reason:
    "Isolated visions engulfed muzzled thoughts,
    Taped skeletal frames escaped triple knots,"
    They just flew out at me...Very Good job, 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Great details as usual. Nice use of words. But there is one thing that has to do with all your poems...it's good that you don't use fill words too much...but if you use big words over and over again...the poem loses the emotional part of it.

    ^-^Keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, this one is just so great.
    you have a great talent that not much of us do here, your are a true poet. I really enjoy reading your poems.
    hope to read more of your great works.
    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Misstress

    Good words usage combined with a sense of imaginery.good combination.

    GOd bless!

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Awsome write! love this style of wrtting

    keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    Wow im always amazed by ur words. good job expressin urself. keep it up

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow, that was amazing.. And I really mean it hun.. You have such an amazing talent.. You seem to twirl words around your finger to make them fit the way you want them to.. It is truly amazing.. Wonderful work Taleee! I can't get enough of it! =P 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Esther

    This poem is kinda long, but brilliant still! I love your title by thw way! chaos! i think it is a mint word!

  • 11 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Hmm, that one was interesting. And! I learned a bunc of new words! Lol. I really liked how you didn't use the simple words that are in every poem that you read lol. It was unique, and I liked it! 5/5 =]

    -Jenna.

  • 11 years ago

    by Peyton

    WOW!!!! great poem i wish i could write like you!!! can you check mine out and tell me if im any good coz i trybut i dont seem to be gettin anywhere!!!!!!! lol keep writin xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    Well Nat, like I've been saying poem after poem. You have been maturing as a writer and you are getting so much better quicker. This poem is proof alone. Your words are more complexed and your views are more open. This is a really good poem and you put a lot of thought and effort into this one. Hooray for big words too :P

  • 11 years ago

    by KB

    Wow i really like that

  • 11 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This whole poem, is simply amazing. It has such depth, emotion, and flow. The vocabulary is brilliant, and the insight is well organized. Nicely done, once again.

  • 11 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    If I read it correctly, the flow was a bit off and it took away from this precious poem. But, I did like it. The description was amazing and the detail phenomial. (Spelling?) Great job.

    xDarkSuicidex 5.5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammie

    Woah.. you are amazing at writing. Every word of that is amazing, and i definately learned a few new words from that. Such detail and discription into a sad poem. Keep it up. =]

  • 11 years ago

    by Audrey

    Loved it babe

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wow Natalie. That is amazing. I love your detail and your wording it was fantastic too read. I really enjoyed the whole entire poem actually. It was great.

  • 11 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    I'm really loving your sad poems, Neeki! A douse of strong vocab mixed with a fresh sad taste for poetry! Confusing probably but what I mean is I love your views on things.