Hey Gal, I've been waiting for a newly written poem of you..for so long, hehe!
this is very great, the ending of the poem was very touchyyyy...
I dunno wut to say but this poem is creative and, to tell the truth, I found difficulty in reading some lines..since my english doesn't rock,hehe!
very great poem thou ;)
Keep it up, My sweet inspiration =D
Beautiful poem...the words flowed like magic:)
I really liked these sentences for some reason:
"Isolated visions engulfed muzzled thoughts,
Taped skeletal frames escaped triple knots,"
They just flew out at me...Very Good job, 5/5
Great details as usual. Nice use of words. But there is one thing that has to do with all your poems...it's good that you don't use fill words too much...but if you use big words over and over again...the poem loses the emotional part of it.
Wow, that was amazing.. And I really mean it hun.. You have such an amazing talent.. You seem to twirl words around your finger to make them fit the way you want them to.. It is truly amazing.. Wonderful work Taleee! I can't get enough of it! =P 5/5
Hmm, that one was interesting. And! I learned a bunc of new words! Lol. I really liked how you didn't use the simple words that are in every poem that you read lol. It was unique, and I liked it! 5/5 =]
Well Nat, like I've been saying poem after poem. You have been maturing as a writer and you are getting so much better quicker. This poem is proof alone. Your words are more complexed and your views are more open. This is a really good poem and you put a lot of thought and effort into this one. Hooray for big words too :P