Hey,,,,, your poem is very touching and sad. U express urself very well, but you should be aware of ur grammer abit. Excellent poem! ;) keep up the good work

This poem is sooosad and made me wanna cry and who cares about your grammar. you told it straight from your heart and thats the most important thing. very well done. **tear**

WOW.
I really, really,
like this one.
Its deep yer, it has happened to so many people

a true 5/5

WOW.....This poem caught me off guard. Made me wanna cry. Feels like I can feel ur pain.
You expressed urself, and wrote a beautiful, but yet very sad poem. I loved it. Excellent work, keep them coming. 5/5

Wow this is amazing!
u have alot of talent w/ ur words!!!!!!
5/5
thanx for my comment-

jenie

Awesome, this rap? 5/5.

Amazingly written. i usually dont read like slang poems =P ima not big wit them but yaaa urz caught my eye. i had to read it, and ima glad! it wuz great, and sad. loved it!

5/5

--**Skye~