Goodnight Moon

by FlirtingWithDeath   Sep 28, 2006


Goodnight moon~

Goodnight moon
You glow in my room
Your silver mist
Makes my tears shine in the gloom.

You have been great to me,
Keeping me company
In the dark,
But now it is time
To say goodnight.

I will rest my eyes
And never wake up
This world is too cruel
For my sensitive heart.
I tried many times
To love everyone
But its time to say goodnight
A girl can only take so many
Let me downs.

My eyes have lost sight
To all that is good and bright
Let me lay down on my bed,
And say my last goodnight.

I will miss you moon
You shine brighter
In the night
You are a great friend to me
And a inspiration
To most people
Not to give
Into fright.

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  • 17 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Cjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj.
    Love this poem.
    Quite dark. M'm. Good.

    Take care. Ly.
    N-G-C-S.

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    I really like this. It's sad, and really well written. I think it flowed flawlessly, and your emotions were expressed very well. The only thing i think might sound better, is in the third stanza, second last line:
    A girl can only take so much
    Let me downs.

    I think instead of much it should be many. Just a thought. Very good poem though, please keep writing, your very talented. =] 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    ...Sad...and pretty...Not exactly something I like but it's interesting. The beginning was well done and nicely tied into the others. So then there's the part with the "goodnight" that really captures attention.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Amber Parker

    I like this. It's kind of like a twisted lullaby. Kind of sad.

    I hope you write more soon :)

    ~Scarlett

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