I kind of really liked the title, and I think I may steal an idea from it :)
Not very hard to understand Nat, I know you somewhat, and I could figure out what you are talking about. Like a tightrope, the fear is falling.. like meeting a guy. The entire crossing gives you a rush of adredaline.. and it feels great, if you make it.. it's wonderful.. if you fall.. its terrible.. I hope you don't fall Nat..
Gosh! I loved the idea behind this I really did. 'Twas very good && Interesting! Well done there.
Also, Your rhyme was great. I loved the pattern and it was a great flow!
Very good poem, The idea really made me like it. Well thought out! [:
Wow.. I love this poem. Very creative metaphor that you used. It's a very imaginative idea and sometimes it really does feel that way. And you had great word usage in this. My favorite lines were:
Safety net removed from underneath me,
Only thin air now to catch me when I fall,
Those really stood out to me. Great job on this! 5/5
This one, i think is my favorite, its hard to choose from all of your amazing poems. This poem, i can relate to heaps, i think thats why i love it so much. The idea of walking to a tightrope being compared to giving another guy a chance, is very clever. I love the comparison. Excellent write. You have so much talent! =] 5/5
Wow, I would really have to say that this poem is amazing. I adored your use of words here, and I love the way you related it to using the tightrope. I would have never thought of something like that. But still, what amazes me is your use of words. Wonderful. I'm off to read more of your work.
That was a perfectly written poem. It was very clever of you to say what you mean, with out saying it at all. [Did that even make sense =\ lol.]
Deep & descriptive.
Good use of metaphores & choice of words.
Loved it. Well deserved 5/5