Comments : Tightrope Destination

  • 11 years ago

    by donna

    This reminds me of a reoccurring dream I have. It scares the poop out of me *doh.. Excellent poem, the wording was brilliant. Very well done 5/5 xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This is very well written poem..As stated in your poem any percieved rejection leaves a scar

  • 11 years ago

    by Darien

    I kind of really liked the title, and I think I may steal an idea from it :)
    Not very hard to understand Nat, I know you somewhat, and I could figure out what you are talking about. Like a tightrope, the fear is falling.. like meeting a guy. The entire crossing gives you a rush of adredaline.. and it feels great, if you make it.. it's wonderful.. if you fall.. its terrible.. I hope you don't fall Nat..

  • 11 years ago

    by LittleBlackRose

    Wow, great poem, you've found great words to say this, I really like it!

  • 11 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Gosh! I loved the idea behind this I really did. 'Twas very good && Interesting! Well done there.
    Also, Your rhyme was great. I loved the pattern and it was a great flow!
    Very good poem, The idea really made me like it. Well thought out! [:

  • 11 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Wow.. I love this poem. Very creative metaphor that you used. It's a very imaginative idea and sometimes it really does feel that way. And you had great word usage in this. My favorite lines were:
    Safety net removed from underneath me,
    Only thin air now to catch me when I fall,
    Those really stood out to me. Great job on this! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I hope it all ends good. The one reason why I haven't took a chance with any boy is because I'm afraid to be hurt in the end. Keep your head up girl!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Normal is the Watchword

    Neeki I know the feeling. I started talking to this guy I met online over a year ago and sometimes I fall for him so much.

    I think you used some interesting descriptions and I am loving the tightrope metaphor. It's so easy to realte to but shockingly realistic.

  • 11 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Whoa Hun. I love this poem, for some reason I understood it. It was a wonderful read. I thought you wrote it wonderfully.

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow, another great poem added to this site,
    very nicely written
    very well done 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, that was awesome sweetie! The flow was good and I loved the metaphors you put in! The descriptions and vocabulary you used was beautiful.. Lovely job hunny! 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Tammie

    This one, i think is my favorite, its hard to choose from all of your amazing poems. This poem, i can relate to heaps, i think thats why i love it so much. The idea of walking to a tightrope being compared to giving another guy a chance, is very clever. I love the comparison. Excellent write. You have so much talent! =] 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    I like how the meaning of this poem is somewhat "hidden". The flow is flawless and your word choice is perfect---I love it! =D Keep it up, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by DarkJem

    Cool

  • 10 years ago

    by - xoxrachellee.;

    Wow, I would really have to say that this poem is amazing. I adored your use of words here, and I love the way you related it to using the tightrope. I would have never thought of something like that. But still, what amazes me is your use of words. Wonderful. I'm off to read more of your work.

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Billi Vermillion

    You are a very talented writer.
    And i admire that.

    This poem is very strong and very emotional.

    I love it.

  • 10 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Wow.

    That was a perfectly written poem. It was very clever of you to say what you mean, with out saying it at all. [Did that even make sense =\ lol.]
    Deep & descriptive.
    Good use of metaphores & choice of words.
    Loved it. Well deserved 5/5
    Bec.x

  • 9 years ago

    by Neil Marsden

    Incredible piece of work, Wow!!
    How can you NOT find time to write this quality of feeling.

    Neil.