Well done! As you might be able to tell, I don’t write poems which restrict me, so I don’t know much about them at all, but from what I can see, you’ve don’t a great job, and I enjoyed reading it so I’m going to give you 5/5 anyway.
Great job, Love Mel

I liked this because it wasn't very long! and because it flowed beautifully!

Tehehe. This one made me smile. It was so cute, and happy! It was very well written as this is a frustrating style to write! I had many troubles with mine and you have done a wonderful job. 5/5 =]]

-Jenna.

The flow and everything was just great... you have crazy talent... love all your poems... keep writing! :D

~angel~

This was amazing the imaginaton put in this poem was awsome!

keep it up!

Great job i just got back and read ur poem loved it great job a-ma-zi-zing lol all ur poems are 5/5 keep it up

I thought that I knew everything about poetry that there was to know when I joined this site. But it's poets like you that proves that I basically no nothing. You are a brilliant poet and I've loved every poem of yours that I have read. This one really proved that your loaded with talent. Welcome to my favorites. 5/5

Love
Letty

Excellent work, you followed a criteria and still came up with a brilliant piece or art, rhyme, rhythm, and everything else, this is the complete package. Cheers.

'Whitey

Wow, Jessy. I've seen this style of writing alot lately, and it looks sooo cool, but really hard. You made it seem so easy to do.

Not only did you keep the style flowing right, but you had some great emotions and wonderful wording, too! A great poem in my eyes! I loved it! 5/5 Ily.

Natalie``

& I'm okay ;P Just been thinking alot lately.

Very great poem u have here i give u a 5/5

Ooo. I like this poem a lot. I liked how you repeated a lot of the lines over again. It gave the poem a sort of depth. The flow was very good, and the rhymes were well done. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Another hard poem... you like challenges don't cha? Anyways nice poem my favorites lines are:
Slowly clearing her slate, destroying the evil within
Washing her insides, leaving them pure and white
Turning over a new leaf, stepping out of old skin
This makes you really think.
5/5

That was a beautiful poem! i loved how u worded it and of course it flowed since the kind of poem it is, it has to. haha. i love how u write poetry that actually has a style and u dont just free form it. its really refreshing seeing a young writer actually take interest. great poem! 5/5

I thought this one was very good also, you have a lot of talent.