Comments : My tears =)

  • 11 years ago

    by twisted reality

    Hmm...I didn't quite understand what you're trying to grasp here, but it was alright.

    [For once, i could see you and hug you for a {litlle} while]
    ^^Should be {little}. The flow was okay, but not the greatest. I didn't know who you were talking about with 'they,' either. Hmm...Keep it up. =) 4/5 xoxo

    Samantha

  • 11 years ago

    by Misstress

    So much emotions here..
    Its good to see you write again..
    Keep it up..
    Youre getting better and better..

    God Bless!

  • 11 years ago

    by Oscar

    Wow this poem was really good, i really felt what you were trying to get across

  • 11 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Awww very deep and touching, I liked it and you discribed how you are feeling...
    Karms.

  • 11 years ago

    by blueknight

    I feel somethin g on this one coz I cry last night lols but the truth is this was a great poem with lots of emotion very well penned great job

    XD
    Geneross

  • 11 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow i like this one i can rly relate good job 5/5

  • Wow.. This was really sad. Nicely done though. Keep it up!

    Natalie``

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Nicely done.

    Pretty sad, but good. :)

  • 11 years ago

    by X2892

    Great peom 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by BrokenREALiTy

    Deep, emotional . I like how yur givin` yher tears voice . Love it .
    ..ღ__MiNDYY

  • 11 years ago

    by ***searching for the one

    So sad it made me cry! but thats a good thing.

  • 10 years ago

    by ERIKA

    That is a very good poem....i guess

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    5/5 great poem lots of emotion

  • 10 years ago

    by Letty

    Bravo! Now this was excellent! It was filled with deep emotion, there weren't many errors, and it flowed beautifully. 5/5 Keep writing like this and I'll keep reading.

    Love
    Letty

  • 10 years ago

    by Lindsay

    Its very meaningful, and I can feel your emotion as I read it. Please though, spelling counts. I lost the flow of your writing when I came upon your errors.
    Keep it up! I would like to see more!

  • 10 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Very emotianal, and meaningful poem! A great read! Great flow all through it. Keep it up! xx

  • 10 years ago

    by monika

    Very nice poem but i dnt understand what it is doing in the slang cetegory it could do well somewhere else as well :) well done

  • 10 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow I know what you
    are talking about

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I wasnt really sure at times what you were talking about in some places. I didnt think it should be in hte slang catogory i think it should be placed somewhere else. The emotion was great and meaningful Good effort~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Cliche, but not too bad. I'm not too sure what else to say, but if I were you, I'd get away from cliche.
    For, when you aren't writing cliche like, you do an amazing job. Particarly on nature poems.=]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5