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This piece is deep,
memories of weaknesses and fears surely hurts..
The words twig by twig falls into a well written poem, I think it is very naturally yet very effective for sure..
Wow, this is one of the best composed abstract life poems I've read for a long time. It deep, meaningful, yet gentle. Keep it up. By the way, how are you doing, haven't heard from you in a while.
Gurlie i miss your poems!!!!!!!! i love your work!
Ok i suggest just one thing. you need to incorporate a few more words per line. just to give it more meaning and effect.
but this is still very very stunning.
5 from me. i will read more tomorrow.
by Neo Castelino
I like dis.....
by Mr M
Beautifully written. I loved the way you illustrated how others tend to destroy our dreams.
by Arun Khan
5 / 5 !!! REALLY NICE