Comments : A dream no more

  • 11 years ago

    by Misstress

    This piece is deep,

    memories of weaknesses and fears surely hurts..

    The words twig by twig falls into a well written poem, I think it is very naturally yet very effective for sure..

  • 10 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wow, this is one of the best composed abstract life poems I've read for a long time. It deep, meaningful, yet gentle. Keep it up. By the way, how are you doing, haven't heard from you in a while.

    Noni

  • 10 years ago

    by ChevyCowgirl23

    Gurlie i miss your poems!!!!!!!! i love your work!
    Amanda

  • 10 years ago

    by David

    Ok i suggest just one thing. you need to incorporate a few more words per line. just to give it more meaning and effect.

    but this is still very very stunning.

    5 from me. i will read more tomorrow.

    David

  • 10 years ago

    by Neo Castelino

    I like dis.....

  • 10 years ago

    by Mr M

    Beautifully written. I loved the way you illustrated how others tend to destroy our dreams.

  • 10 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    5 / 5 !!! REALLY NICE