I loved the little introduction! Really original. =)
The poem its self was great. Tells such a interesting storey and kept great flow.
I adored the ending [These are the secrets,
Hidden behind a forbidden love.] Such a great ending I thought. Really finished it off for me.
Well done. =)
I must say that when I first decided to read and comment on this poem, I thought that it would be similar to most of the love poems that I have already read. But it's not, it's really quit unique. I loved the flow of it, the emotion that was put into it and I loved the hold imagery of it and the concept . This was a amazing poem. I'm looking forward to reading more of your poems. Keep up the good work. 5/5