Comments : Batman, Candy Apples and Tooth Decay

  • 10 years ago

    by Lu

    Incredibly awesome Tim ! (the poem I mean, not the visit to the dentist....lol)

    Your creativity shines in this piece just in time for the kiddies to learn a lesson before Halloween.

    Isn't it great how the batman costume still exists to this day. God I remember wanting my mom to make me a smurf costume one year way back...and now kids go " huh what's a smurf " Ahhhh the great old days.

    Anyways I'm rambling on and on now....lol

    Excellent poem Timothy, An enjoyable read .....excluding the parts where your candies got smashed and the dentist of course... that had to be trully devastating for Batman...lol

    Thank you for sharing your words !
    Take care
    Luanne

  • 10 years ago

    by sibyllene

    Hee he, i loved the title!

  • 10 years ago

    by PnQ Mod Account

    "freaking candy apples...." HAHAHAHAHA
    That whole thing was spectacular, Tim!

    I'm glad you disclosed the troubles you were having to me, Tim. I'm always here for ya and more than willing to help you clear those cobwebs that we all get sometimes!

    Always believe in yourself!

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Awesome poem, Tim.
    Sorry, I'm just now getting around to reading it. I loathe reading poetry when I can't write it...know what I mean?
    I'm glad Ann Marie was able to help ya out.
    Talk to you soon...Holly

  • 10 years ago

    by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG

    Lol, good job. That was cute. And I loved the title.

    -Jenna.

  • 10 years ago

    by Krissey

    That is just sooo cute! I remember my favorite halloween! I love the title of this it made me smiled and I haven't even read your poem yet! Cute Halloween Poem, something I've read very few of!
    Krissey

  • 10 years ago

    by RACHELLE

    Cute!

  • 10 years ago

    by SSSAAMMMYY

    Great poem! Love the wording. You are every talented poet keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Alexis

    I like it it's enthusiastick and telling people a leson of roten teeth

  • 10 years ago

    by Denise Butler

    Great poem Tim, I liked the verse about the old broad with no teeth but a frightening laugh..lol. You always come hrough in the end, keep writing. Denise

  • 10 years ago

    by Judah

    A VERY MIX EMOTIONAL READ,SAD N FUNNY.GREAT STUFF!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Corinne

    Halloween has always been a favorite holiday for me. You captured elements of its allure quite well. And I enjoyed the funny ending...but didn't you mean "thugs" and not thuds?

  • 9 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I loved this poem alot you portrayed it so nicely. I really caught the halloween view into my mind. It's sad because over here in Australia you don't actually see the whole halloween thing with kids running around the streets and pumpkins ect =[ so thankyou for portraying this into my mind. It sounds beautiful. ~Mel

  • 9 years ago

    by InterviewWithTheKat

    I rather enjoyed this poem. =)
    Very sweet.
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