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Hmmmm. dont know what to say to this. it is very good. that it is.
also you have so many descriptive words. that is a trait you should keep hold of. makes your poems special.
i gave it a 5. excellent.
I like this one alot... very nice descriptions on the wave movement... i like the second to last line.. about, washing away... good... very good..
by Jenni Marie
I loved this, excellent work.
by Beauty In The Breaking
This is the first one of yours that I've read and I loved it!
You caught the emotions so wonderfully and I can feel the joy and sadness behind it. Never let anyone tell you otherwise.
Well I know that I already commented on this one but since I'm working my way through all of your's I thought that I'd do it again xD
I loved it just as much the second time as I did the first and although I love all of yours so far this one is my fav.
by Crystal Gaze
Amazing, great job!
Great piece of poetry. 5/5 and i do agree with what you said in your post. Comments like "It doesn`t make sense" and such are hurtful. keep writing, i`ll keep reading.