Comments : Dancing on Water

  • 11 years ago

    by David

    Hmmmm. dont know what to say to this. it is very good. that it is.

    also you have so many descriptive words. that is a trait you should keep hold of. makes your poems special.

    i gave it a 5. excellent.

    David

  • 11 years ago

    by Marina

    I like this one alot... very nice descriptions on the wave movement... i like the second to last line.. about, washing away... good... very good..
    -Marina.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I loved this, excellent work.

  • 11 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    This is the first one of yours that I've read and I loved it!
    You caught the emotions so wonderfully and I can feel the joy and sadness behind it. Never let anyone tell you otherwise.

  • 11 years ago

    by Beauty In The Breaking

    Well I know that I already commented on this one but since I'm working my way through all of your's I thought that I'd do it again xD

    I loved it just as much the second time as I did the first and although I love all of yours so far this one is my fav.

  • 11 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Amazing, great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Untamed

    Great piece of poetry. 5/5 and i do agree with what you said in your post. Comments like "It doesn`t make sense" and such are hurtful. keep writing, i`ll keep reading.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ajmal

    Its amazing....