Comments : He might.

  • 11 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    Its different, I liked it alot up to the last set but otherwise I liked it. 4.0 keep it up
    hes more.
    hes me.
    hes all.

    my fav lines

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I enjoyed this one too, I like these type of styles. I enjoyed the imagery and flow.

  • 11 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    I think that this poem needs more words to it. I liked it though. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by dollwithafrown

    Interesting style. I really enjoyed this. Just as a little advice, it's always best to use the right punctuation, etc. When you're writing "hes" there should be an apostrophe before the 's'. Anyhow, good work.

  • 11 years ago

    by amoxi

    You are a good writer but your poems would probably be better of you had longer lines and more describing words just a suggestion