A Demon's Halo

by Ashleigh Skye   Oct 29, 2006


Innocent until proven guilty,
yet the judgment will never cease,
unspoken words of hate and spite,
and a demon on the streets.

Watched through every window,
a marked man in the crowd,
hateful stares and harmful whispers,
loom like an overhead cloud.

Black listed by society,
before any judgment has passed,
condemned to walk in solitude,
in the footsteps of those outcast.

Forgotten are the strengths,
the fond memories of what used to be,
all that's left are these accusations,
bringing waves of pain and misery.

Blinded by the fangs,
a halo goes unseen,
another angel falls between the cracks,
in society's attempt to gleam.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Spirit

    A Demon's Halo

    The last line lost me. Sorry if this is blunt but I belive it's true. Ypur words had me and your imperfect rhyme scheme worked, but when I got to that last line I lost the grasp and the poem just fell apart. You could fix this by making the last line in your poem stronger, this would fix your problem.

    Great read anyway.

  • 16 years ago

    by Broken Inside He only wants to hurt me

    This poems really has a great expression of emotion. the flow could have been better but overall 5/5. great work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Taylor Lyn

    This is a great poem, I like the imagery and word choice! Topic rings completely true to a lot of people in today's world. Excellent work, I enjoyed reading this piece!

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Greatly worded, the flow was also magnificent, i really like how you can just write and it all fits together, it seems to me in this poem its like someone on death row( i only say that b cuz i just got done watching the green mile)

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Greatly worded, the flow was also magnificent, i really like how you can just write and it all fits together, it seems to me in this poem its like someone on death row( i only say that b cuz i just got done watching the green mile)

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