My best friend

by Jessica Lynn   Oct 29, 2006


There once was two girls
who were the best of friends in the world...
they laughed they played
they shared everything they made..
no such thing as a secret
they would never keep it...
promises and dreams
they helped each other succeed...
she gave me a home
and now its my own...
left me here to rout
because she forgot...
forgot what we had
it was so sad...
the day she found him
everything was different to me...
always over his house
followed him like a mouse...
she left me here to be crushed
i miss her so much...
picks him over her friends
she does not comprehend...
if it were me first i wouldn't of done what she does
i would of had my own ways of fun..
fun with my friends
for they are my first and last choice..
true love is a killer
thats why we cant all be similar...
feel so empty inside
i was so blind...
to not know i was alone
cant wait till the day she comes back home...
friendships never end
thats why we call it best friends..

-by Jessica DellaVecchio
dedicated to my best friend Casey

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  • 8 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Thats supose to read I LOVE YOU SWEETY
    AND I MISS YOU NOT I LOVE SWEET JESS
    AND I MISS YOU LOL IT IS I:35 IN THE MORING SO GIVE ME A BREAK LOL

  • 8 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Jess this will always be my favorite poem
    EVER maybe because its so fill with so many
    emotioms or cause its personal or whatever
    but anyway its my fAV. I miss you guys
    together. it just feels so diffent and diffent in a sad way. Oh well life goes on and people
    come and go but it stills sucks.
    I love sweet jess and I miss you and the way life use to be but I told once befor you
    can have everything you want in this life except the way it use to be
    cy

  • 9 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    "There once was two girls
    who were the best of friends in the world...
    they laughed they played
    they shared everything they made.."

    I know how this feels, I was like this with my best friend.

    "the day she found him
    everything was different to me..."

    I can relate to this again, when my best friend found her boyfriend she had no time for me. She basically blocked me out of her life.

    "i miss her so much...
    picks him over her friends
    she does not comprehend...
    if it were me first i wouldn't of done what she does "

    Your so honest in your poetry, which is a good thing. It makes it a lot easier for many people to relate and read.

    "cant wait till the day she comes back home...
    friendships never end
    thats why we call it best friends.."

    I like your ending, it shows that she still is your best friend dispite the fact that she chose her boyfriend over you many times.

    Just know that you can still see her, and still be with her you just have to try. My best friend moved to a different country to be with her boyfriend we hardly ever talk now :( Good poem. I can really relate to this. 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    This one makes me feel like a wus so bad
    it always brings tears to my eyes.

  • 10 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

    Its amazing how much you growth since
    you wrote this . you need to get some poems up IM STARting to read the old over and over I LOVE YOUR POEMS UR #1 FAN
    CY