Aww, this poem is so extremely sad, and i really hope it's not true. if so, you will be in my prayers tonight.
"that their is just no way"
you used the wrong "their", the "their" you used is possesive, and theres nothing possesive here, use this "their" instead: there
"if she saw my 5th birthday"
you should change that to say, "if she lived to see my 5th birthday" it would make more sense...anyways great job sweety, rhyming didn't seem forced at all, 5;5
Im sorry baby. my great grandma died two days before christmas and no one told me about it for almost a year. i know how it feels to loose someone close to you. and im very sorry for your lose. people say that its easiest to write poetry about things that mean the most to you. (good or bad) and i guess your mom is something that is easy tp write about. even though it hurts...
O.m.g that is so sad...im sorry for what happened... i hope you move on and just because she has passed away doesnt mean that she is not there she will always be watching you and always be in your heart. great poem 5/5
Aww, that was a sad one man. You definitely have a very pure heart, and that can be a very dangerous thing. I can tell you that from experience. We feel love and pain at a higher level than other people. I'm sure you know what I mean..