As sad as this poem is i am very blown away. keep up the good work.

Omggg. that was absolutely amazing. i love the last line "BUt mommy isn't there" that sooo sad. btu ver good. deffinitely 5/5

xo kisses xo

Omg! This is so wonderful and sad at the same time. I thought about my mom through the whole poem. She died in May 2005 ;_;

I liked that, it made me cry, it was very nicely done.

Wowwww.

this poem is soo sad.
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i hope this isn't true, but if it is, i'm soo sorry.

this is beautiful and very well written.
5/5

Its beutiful, exquisite and sad. -hugs- im sooo sorry! -hugs- hope you feel better soon

Excellent work.

i love it.

<3 Shauna Mariee

Wow this is one of the saddest poems i have ever read..

i certainly hope this isn't true, but if it is i am very sorry..

this is a very powerful piece which made me cry.

5/5.

Awww babyyyy :( thats sooo sadd, madee me tear up.. its so sad to think abotu eveyrone who loses a parent at a young age or just in general

your poem was so well written that it made me want to cry... like ive said before the best poems not only can make you smile, but cry too.,,.. you really need good words, imagery, and a topic to touch peoples hearts and your so good at picking what to write about

cant wait to write another poem with you :P

i lovee youuu

Aww. So sad but so well written.
Good job.
5/5

I hate sad poems. they make me cry.
If this really happened then I am so very sorry for the loss. true the flow wasn't perfect but the message was crystal clear great job.

Omg i almost startwd crying!!!

OMG, this made me cry so much. So sad and touching, but also masterfully done. Good work.

Woah. that hit hard :'(
excellent writing.

Water starts reunite on my eyes after I saw what was happening on the poem ..