Poetry

by Kristina   Dec 4, 2006


My poems are about,
What I've been through,
And things that are going on,
Right now in my life.

I write about how I feel,
And why I feel that way.
Things that happen to me,
Almost every day.

Poetry is a way for me,
To express how I feel inside,
In a way that I can't,
Tell people out loud.

Copyright © October 04, 2006 - Kristina M

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  • 19 years ago

    by LadyWaszky

    *rereads*

    Actually this isnt bad at all. i kinda sounded that way didnt i? lol. sorry. its good. i think it could use longer more adult words but its good. i like the topic alot. its well written and flows nice.

    a few lil probs/things'
    Things that happen to me,
    Almost every day.
    this is a fragment.. i mean.. it /could/ work. but i think you should add 'About'
    (like i write about)

    Otherwise good job. i'd try to add more onto it. make it more detailedand use examples. =]

    x3 Lauren

  • 19 years ago

    by LadyWaszky

    Overall not Bad.
    I think this could definantly be improved. Try using more adult words,.

    i'll finish this comment asap. but i gtg. sorry.

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem. I can relate. I loved this poem. Never stop writing:) 5/5

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