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Awww =[ wow this is amazingly sad. made me cry. wonderful job on it 5/5
by Italian Stallion
Wow, excellent write, I enjoyed it. The flow as well as the structure in this poem was outstanding. I loved your word choice and the Rhyming was good. Keep up the great work.
by Hey Brittknee
The beginning of the poem was ok and then it got so much better as it went along
your an amazing writer (im sure you dont need me to tell you that, but it's the truth)
an adoring fan =P
by Anonymous Angel
excellent poem, i really love the second stanza, the rhyming is perfect as well as the flow 5/5
by Startle Me
When I read the first line
I felt that it was kind of force.
I thought I had mistaken
But once I read the second line
I felt the same way.
But the third stanza
"You know I know"
Wow you are an ahmazing writer!
theres such good rhythm in ur poems.
You have real talent.